Here is my audience feedback;

 

and here is my final trailer;

My Media Evaluation

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

 My media product consists of my Media magazine cover, my poster and my trailer. The ways in which each of these have been created to look authentic but cohesive within each other at the same time, is by the following;

First, my media magazine cover looks authentic because I have used a barcode like every other magazine and also I have written the date it was issued and also the price of the magazine itself. Along with the basics of a Bold, large Masthead and sub headings, I wanted it to look more detailed and professional, so I did some research and saw things like ‘stickers’ which had, for example on my magazine I had written, ‘ULTIMATE REVIEW OF 2014’ which just grabs the reader because if it is ultimate review of the year, they would want to read that more than another. I also, whilst researching, found that some magazines had added information at the bottom of the page written in a ‘strip’ almost. I used this for my magazine and instead of having it straight across the bottom, I decided to have it diagonally across the bottom right hand corner of the page. On this it states that there is an Exclusive inside. This would also grab the reader because in my case, mine says, ’EXCLUSIVE INSIDE! A DAZ FERGUSEN SPECIAL!’ Daz Ferguson is the writer of the story line for my movie, so readers would be really interested to know what he was thinking.

For the background of my media magazine cover, as for my trailer, I wanted to get across the idea of an indie, comedy, comic-type trailer, I really wanted that portrayed. So to do this I used a big flash of light but in a cartoon way. I used this picture with an array of colours; white, yellow, orange, red, burgundy, brown and black. In front of this, I had a picture of two of my Superheroes. I wanted it to really pop, so I had them in dark clothing in the contrast of the white, bright flash behind them. They, in keeping with the indie, comedic, comic theme, were standing in a Super Hero pose which made it funny because they look slightly ridiculous. As you can see, the ‘Hero’ in the pose, looks blurred, as if he had been running in super-speed. This was achieved by using Photoshop. I just smudged the whole right hand side of him to make it look authentically comic book worthy. Also I added headings under the Masthead such as, its webpage, ‘upgradeonline.com’, and also a statement, ‘THE WORLDS BIGGEST MOVIE MAGAZINE.’

 

For my poster, I started off with my background. I wanted something ‘comicy’ whilst eye catching but also cohesive with my magazine cover. So I decided to go for another dramatic flash. For my poster I used just a simple white, yellow and red colour scheme. I then also added the title right in the centre of the flash. At the top of the poster, I added the names of the main characters involved in my movie trailer in the way so that the forename is above the surname. I did those in a white so that they stood out on the red background. I added a heading underneath my main title that states, ’from the studios that brought you ‘THE MORTAL ESCAPE’’. I did this to make it stand out that this movie must be good because it was written by the same man who wrote a successful film before this one, this should help people want to watch it. Below that, there is also a ‘coming soon’ caption. I just added that to make it look more authentic. At the bottom of the poster, I made the blurb that shows all of the details of who did what. I saw this when I was doing my research and thought it looked soo good and detailed, so I made it myself. I then just added an age rating sign of PG at the bottom of the poster to make clear that there was an age range and so the audience knew what that age range was. It is a PG just because there is no swearing and it is a child friendly comedy.

 For my movie trailer, I watched lots of trailers and did a lot of research because I didn’t know where to start. I then broke them all down to what they all, if not most, had in common. They all started with a page that had, in my case, a ‘BBFC’ page giving the rights/certification etc. so I made one of those and it started my trailer off. Also at the beginning of my trailer, just after the BBFC certificate, I added a slide which had my cartoon style title on it. This started my trailer off to look how I wanted it to, to give the idea straight away that it will be a comic book theme. My movie trailer was intentionally going to be an indie comedy filmed like a Blair witch project kind of film, not following the normal conventions of a serious movie. So for mine, I made sure that the filming could be as basic as I could get it to make it funny and then add sarcastic comments throughout by the narrator which added the comedic feel. With it being an indie film also, I wanted it to be my priority to make it look indie, but good at the same time so that it did actually look like a trailer. With it being a comic book themed trailer/story line I really wanted to add some fight scenes so that I could make some onomatopoeic words to pop up on the screen when someone gets hit of falls etc. This made my trailer look better because of the detail I was going into making the trailer and adding the comic book styles such as the onomatopoeic words.

For my music I wanted to definitely use indie, cool music but with the slight hint of cheesy comedy in places to in keep with the themes. The cheesy comedy sounds I added were the hitting sounds I used in the fight scenes and also a dramatic dick scratching sound when it got to the point where you can see the heroes and the villain could not be taken seriously.  I wanted my villain to look corny so I had him strike an overdramatic pose and added dramatic music underneath, not too much but just a hint. All in all he looked very not scary. Again I didn’t want to story line to be taken seriously only to get the vibe of comedy.

 Over all, I think my poster, magazine cover and movie trailer are cohesive because I have added the cartoon-comic feel with them all. With the bright flash backgrounds, the dramatic cover photo of the super speed hero, the main title and even the onomatopoeic words , I made them all look as professional as I could whilst in keeping with the cartoon comic book feel.

 

How effective is your combination of the main products and your ancillary texts?

I think they are very effective because I have made them all as cohesive as possible by overlapping such features as colour schemes and my main cartoon title, as well as dramatic use of colour in the sense of bright, big and bold with the use of onomatopoeic words. For my magazine cover, I have used bright colours with a dark contrast on top and then on my poster, I have used the same idea of bright colours for my background with the contrast on top. I have also used the same backgrounds for each just with different colours. For my trailer, I have used bright colours but just a hint. I used them with my title, my onomatopoeic words and also my film I edited. Lastly I incorporated the title on my poster along with my trailer to tie them together.

 

How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

I used YouTube for the research part of my trailer; I used it to watch to watch lots and lots of different movie trailers to see how I had to do different things to make it realistic.

I then used a Digital DSLR camera for my planning. I used it to take pictures of potential places for my scenes to take place, these were for my blog. I also used the camera to shoot footage for my trailer, to take pictures for my poster and magazine cover. I also used it to record my audience feedback for my trailer; all of my onomatopoeic words and my title were photographed as well to upload to the computer.

I used a camera phone to shoot some of my trailer footage, this was intended to make it look like a Blair witch project kind of documentation but I didn’t use it throughout because I didn’t want to overdo it.

I used Google for all of my research such as magazine covers, posters and also trailers. Also Google helped me use Photoshop and InDesign when I needed it.

I used Google blog/Blogger to put all of my research and planning on. This was like a diary to keep up with all of my work.

I then used InDesign to make my poster and magazine cover. All of my layouts for my final poster and cover were made on InDesign.

I used Photoshop to create my onomatopoeic words and title. First I drew them, by hand in black and white, uploaded them to Photoshop and them edited them by making them bolder and rounded and coloured them in bright comic colours. I also used Photoshop to edit my picture for my magazine cover and also my ‘BBFC’ certificate on my trailer.

I lastly used Movie Studio Platinum to piece together all of my footage for my trailer. This being music, film or sound effects and pictures.

 

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

I have learned that my magazine and poster were noticed to be very cohesive. The audience said that they liked that I used the same basic background but with different colours, because for both it does give the clear idea of what I was portraying without being the same. Also, the first person said that they liked that I used the barcode on the magazine cover, as well as they age rating on the poster. They said it looked more professional which is definitely what I was going for.

The second person said that they liked the cohesion between the poster and the magazine cover and the trailer which was due to the cartoon comic book theme. I did this by having the same distinct colour scheme throughout and also by tying the magazine cover and poster together and then the poster and the trailer. I tied the magazine cover and poster together by using the same colours and backgrounds. I then tied the poster and the trailer together by using the same title in both, and then the bold cartoon lettering in the fight scenes that I used, as similar to the bold cartoon lettering I used for my main title.  He also mentioned that my trailer was rather short, but that was the idea, I wanted it to be a teaser trailer leaving the audience not really knowing which should make them want to watch and find out. So when he said he will have to see what will happen, by watching the trailer, I realised I had done the right thing.

The third person seemed to like my poster and mentioned it was because he liked the colours because they stood out and that he also liked that I used those colours in my trailer in the fight scene. The way I tied those together was by using the same colours/bubble writing for the onomatopoeic words that occurred in the fight scenes. I like that he noticed that, because making the onomatopoeic words and editing them onto the film, took up a lot of time.

The last member of the audience mentioned again that I used the same backgrounds for my magazine cover and my poster and said that it was cohesive because it tied them together. When I decided to use the same background for both my poster and my magazine cover, I wasn’t sure whether they would be too much alike, but the audience made me feel as if it was the right choice because it helped tie them together, and not too much. Lastly they said that it was a nice thing to put the title in both the trailer and on the poster. I felt like I wanted to put it everywhere I could because it was the main title, and then because I also worked really hard on it... but yes, I am glad I didn’t put it on the magazine cover because it would have been too much.

Over all, I have learnt that I have done well with trying to make all of my products cohesive but I could have made my trailer a little bit longer to give some more away.

This is my Movie Poster;

This is my final Movie magazine cover;

I have been designing, and have now completed, my title for the trailer - 'SUPERHEROES VS ZOMBIES'

I have hand drawn, 'SuperHeroes' and, 'Zombies.' I put 'SuperHeroes' (whilst just black and white) onto Photoshop and have then coloured it in and manipulated the brightness and contrast to make it stand out and 'pop'. This really gives off the effect of it being a comic theme.
I also hand drew 'Zombies'. I uploaded it coloured in already, and then manipulated it until it came out with this slimey effect.
I went onto 'DaFont' for the 'VS' and used a font from there to then add on in black to make it really stand out on the bright yellow background.
The background i found on google. I coloured it in and edited it quite alot. in doing so, it looks alot softer not takeing away the attentionon the title but still being quite bright and eye catching to tie in with the comic theme aswell.

I have taken a few location shots for my trailer.

Here are the location shots i have taken so far, these will be mainly used in in the zombie scenes and the fights scene all except the last scene.

The shot below, is where i am going to shoot the zombies walking slowly towards the camera, I will use this area because with there being alot of trees and background, it means that i will be able to use less people to be zombies which makes the process of this trailer alot quicker and easier to shoot as there will be less people to shoot with makeup. The texture of this place will substitute makeing it look like there are more zombies than there are by giving it that fuller appearance due to all the trees.

I want the zombies to be all over this area, starting from the back of the trees, i want them to be interweaving around the trees in a very gloomy way to build up the tension. I may also have a few extras pretend to have been attacked and lay on the floor as a courpse.





The next few shot are just the places where i would like the fight scenes between the zombies and the heroes.



This is now the finished version to the half of my trailer title that will be cartoon. The overall title will be 'Super heroes Vs Zombies'. 'Superheroes' being in the cartoon theme, this is because is best represents different superheroes and the idea is that each letter represents a different superhero.

For the 'Zombies' side of the title, it will be written in a green 'grimey-slime'. I have drawn up my sketches for my main idea for the title.

I have now completed my onomatopoeic words. Here they are for preview;

 

These will be used for when the fight scenes take place. They stand out and are very comic but at the same time they still look amateur and you can tell i have made them myself which gives off the vibe of this trailer being very 'Homemade' and silly, which is what i hope to achieve.

I have now drawn up my stencils for my onomatopeaic words for my trailers cartoonistic side. I have made stencils to scan into the computer to edit, then i will use those on my trailer. At the moment they are just black and white so that when i edit them on the computer they will be more effective and stand out brightly. I have also done my last edit of part of my title, 'SUPER HEROES' with the appropriate fills so then i can also scan that and do the same. I will hopefully do that later.

My work over the Christmas Period.

Ok, so i have been drawing up different onomatopeaio words in comic book style so that, for example, when someone gets hit, the sound of the hit could be 'Bang', ' punch' ect. I would then want the appropriate words to come up on the screen along with the action and sound. I have been practising how to draw them and then i plan to upload them and edit them on the computer. This way they will all be more realistic rather then looking rough. here are the first examples i have drawn;

 

As you can see, these images are not to the standard i would want to use on my final edit of the trailer. For example you can see the pen lines and the imperfect straight lines and wonkeyness. Whereas if i were to edit them on the computer, most likely on Photoshop, i can blur those pen lines and just improve the overall outlook.

(These words arent all nessecarily going to be on my trailer, they are just my practise round.)

 

I have tried to further my title for the trailer by redrawing 'SuperHeroes' but on a larger scale. Ihave changed on of the letter themes because i finally came up with the remaining superhero for it as i couldnt think of one before. (The one i changed is the letter 'U') Here it is;

 

 

 

 

I have also taken time up to write up the first basic draft of my Story Board. Here is the picture of my Story Board;

 The first scene: There will be a short, lets say 3 second clip, at the very beginning of a group of Zombies walking extremely slow towards the camera from afar. Preferbly walking on a field wih a bay of trees at the bottom.
 The second scene: The screen will then go blank, and the logo will apear surrounded by that circular zigzag shape. It will appear on the screen by rotating at a 360 degree angle, gradually getting from small to large, three or four times. however many it takes until it fits the screen.
 The third scene: The screen will then go back to the clip of the Zombies, proceeding to walk forward gradually getting closer. (But at this point they are still quite far away.)
 The fourth scene: This scene is where your first introduced to the main 'SuperHero', inthis scene you see him being very serious. He will be getting ready for the battle but wearing some ridiculous items of weaponery choice.
 The fifth scene: You will then get another flas of the zombies increasing the tension.
 The sixth scene: This scene is where the audience is first introduced to the 'Evil Villian'. In this scene he will be most likely self indulged in his 'Amazing' plan to rule the world. i may even involve and evil laugh at the point.
 The seventh scene: ..Yet another flash of the reaccurring zombies.
 The eigth scene: I would like to squize a scene where you see a bit of the other 'SuperHeroes' getting ready. ( i have not included that in the picture, but i now made it official.)
 The ninth scene: Yes you guessed right, The Zombies again.
 The tenth scene: You will see all of the Heroes together in alliance looking ridiculous.
 The eleventh scene: The last clip of the Zombies. At this point they should be quite close and then the camera will go blank..
 The twelfth scene: This is where the audience will see the zombies get their Butt whooped.
 The thirtheenth scene: A zoomed out view of the five 'SuperHeroes' standing by a bunch of 'Whooped' Zombies.
 The fourteenth scene: This is where i will hopefully write out the script and have it ascending on the screen asif like on starwars but with a narator reading. He will basically be describng how the heroes were knocking the zombies down and out one by one.
 The fifteenth scene: This is the scene where the 'SuperHeroes' get to the 'Evil Villians' Evil Lair. and i get a shot looking a them walking in and then turning the camera all the way round until i get parrallel to the Heroes, to then get a shot of the Vilian. (Hopefully all one shot.)
 The sixteenth and seventeenth scenes: These will be going back and fourth, mid-conversation between the 'SuperHero' and the 'Evil Viallian' basically something short about how they found the Villian or how the heroes are going to defeat the Villian or whatever.
 The eighteenth scene: This will be a close up of the main Super Hero with his SuperHero gang forming an alliance behind him, in a triangular formation.
 The nineteenth scene: And then we go to the close up on the Villian who is then surrounded by zombies.
 The twentieth and potential last scene: It will cut to a cliff hanger. This point will be where the scene will return to the same as the second scene but will be abit more dramatic due to edits and sound.